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-정말 이글은 고난이도인듯하다.. 수준에 안맞아서 효과가 클지는 모르것다.. -모델에세이 따온곳에서 설명을 읽었음에도 불구하고, 이글은 어렵다. -문제일단 자세히 이해하고, intro를 사실-상대방의견-내가동의하는의견- 앞으로전개할 애기 - 본론1 에 장점 - 단점도 가치 쓰고 하다보면 cohesion 에서 점수 잃기가 쉽단다.. - 본론2 에는 단점- topic + support1 - 본론3 에는 추가적인 단점 및 해결책 암시 - topic + support 1 - 결론 에는 질문한번더 언급후 단점이 많다고 의견 제시 난 대부분 paragraph을 본론 2개만 하는데.. 저렇게 하다보니 쓸말들이 부족하더라.. 차라리 3개로 쪼개서 이렇게 배열해가지고 topic +support 1 정도로 구성하는것도.. 나쁘지 않은것 같다.. 이게더 안전한건가? 실수를 줄일 수 있는 폼? 일단 첨삭 나오는거 보고 판단할란다 두개 형식으로 제출했으니.. 모델에세이 베껴쓰기 12일차...8개모델에세이를 각 10번씩 필사중에 있다.. 이제 손가락 감각이 조금 무뎌진거 같기도 하다. 인간은 진화하는듯.. In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, future developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive. To what extent do you agree with this view? The last two decades have seen enormous changes in the way people’s lives are affected by IT, with ma...

- 9번 베껴쓰고, 2개 eassay task 2 작성 및 첨삭 제출 (3 Feb 2014) - 읽는 속도와 이해되는 속도가 좀 빨라지는것 같다..  마찬가지로 글을 지어내는 속도도 미미하지만 빨라졋다. Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?   These day, the government spends a large part of its budget not only on public services, but also the arts. Although I agree that it is important to spend money on public services, I do not think spending on the arts is a waste of money. There are several reasons for spending a significant amount of the government budget on public services. First and foremost, public services are the things such as hospitals, roads and schools, and these things determine the quality of life that most of us will have. For example, if the government does not spend enough money on hospitals, the health of our society may decline. Similarly, if not enough money is spent o...

IELTS 배점 요인에서 가장큰 파트는 필자의 글이 주제에 잘 대응했냐 NO OFF THE TOPIC 필자의 글들이 두서있게 잘 배열 되어 있냐 WITH GLUE WORDS 필자의 단어들이 다양하게 쓰였나 플자의 문법.. 물론 위에서부터가 중요하다. 위에서 두개만 만족해도 6이 넘는다... 난 왜 5일까를 나처럼 고민한다면 저 두개를 잘해야 한다...... 그럼.. 난 한글로도 논설문을 써본적이 있는가 한번 물어보자.. 많지 않을껄....? ㅎ 설날 3일을 대강대강 베껴쓰기만 하고 넘어가서 월요일 다시 첨삭받을 TASK2 를 쓰려하니 드는생각은.. 생각보다 많은 문장을 흉내 냇다는것 하지만.. 모아놓고 보니.. 말이 좀 이상하다.. 이게 베껴쓰기의 부작용인가..  베껴쓰기 2주차

강남의 유명한 대형 학원부터.. 규모는 작지만 실력있는 이들이 교수하는곳에서 수업을 20대 동안 다니면서 느낀건 딱 하나다. 내가 여기서 얻을 수 있는건 이사람들의 시행착오와 이사람들이 이렇게 까지 교수할 수있는 능력을 얻을때까지 겪고 해왓던 일들이 몬지 알아내는것이 더욱 중요하다 이었다. 어느정도 영어를 좀 한다고 생각하는 이들이 IELTS 에서 받는 점수대는 평균적으로 5 점대이다. 평균 5가 아니라 라이팅이 5점대다.. 물론 리딩 리스닝이 5점인 사람들도 잇겠지만 대부분 영어를 좀 햇다고 하는 이들은 리딩과 리스닝은 6.5 나 7을 넘나들고 상대적으로 라이팅이나 스피킹에서 약점을 드러낸다. 고민끝에 선택하는것이 학원인데,  이들 학원들은 자료를 제공하고 폼형태가 어떻고 어떤 표현을 써야되고 이정도에서 교수가 끝나는듯하다. 우리가 진정 원하는건 어떤 방법으로 연습할때 내 라이팅 실력이나 스피킹 실력이 나아지나를 고민하고 알기를 원하는건데 이들은 손쉬운 교수법으로 우리를 이끈다. 근데 그중의 여러학원중에서 그래도 실력있고 규모는 작아도 수업이 매우 비쌋던 강남의 한 *K 어학원..ㅋㅋ 참 이것저것 많이 자료도 받고 다른이들 에세이도 받아서 다가치 뭐가 잘못됫는지도 알아보고.. 근데 2달정도 들으니 레파토리는 같았다. 수업의 질이 떨어진다기 보단 수업이 예상이 되더라 이거다. 근데 이 학원의 강점은 이 원장이 우리보다 먼저 시행착오를 겪었던 사람이란것이다. 매번 말하던것이 있다.. 외워라. 어떻게? 소리내서 ㅋㅋ 간단하지만 매우 어려운일 대부분의 이들이 이것을 하지 못하거나 하다가 중도에 포기하게 된다. 물론 나에겐 이것이 매우 도움이 됫다고는 말 못하겟다. 대신 스피킹 점수가 올라가더라 라이팅이 아니고 ㅋㅋ 말을 잘하려먼 말을 내뱃으라는게 진리인듯하다. 어쨋든 라이팅은 외우는게 답도 되고 중요하다고 생각한다. 근데 방법은 소리내서 내뱃는거보단 베껴쓰고 다시 쓰고 하는것이 더 효과가 있다고 ...

Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems. Many countries of the world are currently experiencing problems caused by rapidly growing populations in urban areas, and both governments and individuals have a duty to find ways to overcome these problems. Overpopulation can lead to overcrowding and poor quality housing in many large cities. Poorly heated or damp housing could cause significant health problems, resulting in illness, such as bronchitis or pneumonia. Another serious consequence of overcrowding is a rising crime rate as poor living conditions may lead young people in particular to take desperate measures and turn to crime or drugs. In terms of solutions, I believe the government should be largely responsible. Firstly, it is vital that the state provides essential housing and healthcare for all its citizens. Secondly, setting up commu...

Every government is are now facing the a severe problem for regarding fresh drinking water as compared to the past . There are several reasons of that causing cause this . and Nevertheless, suggest ions on possible their solutions for entire human race this problem are also available . In line with this, this essay will discuss the underlying causes of this phenomenon, and present possible solutions for this predicament. [1] To begin with, the first reason why much edible potable water is in shortage is that firstly, people often use water as an one of eternal resource s when they brush their teeth or even when they wash their hands and face. It is eviden t ce that the tap is usually opened during these activities and fresh water goes directly into the plughole. Another (An additional) reason s why there is a lack of fresh water happened around us is the increase in the numbers of factories, which often need tremendous amount of water, as they producing produce ...

정말 손가락이 끊어질거 같다. 모델에세이 베껴쓰기를 9일정도 했는데.. 물론 9일밖에 안됬지만.. 나의 첨삭 점수는 1.5 나 상승했다.. 안할수가 없는 근거가된다..근데 손가락이 너무 아프다는... 어쨋든 그나마 좀 손이 덜아픈 JEBRA TAPLICLIP [MADE IN JAPAN] 샤프로 한자한자 필사중이다.. 영어필사는 아무나 하는게 아니라 아무나 쉽사리 성공못하나보다.. 이번 BAND 9 짜리 에세이는 교육과 복지관련 문제이다 물론 TASK 2 다. 본인은.. 벌써 5 번이상 필사를 했다.. 어느정도 어 이글 내가 읽었던건데 쓰봣던거 같은데 까지 느낌올때 그때까지만 진행하는중 임을 밝힌다.. Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services? Discuss the above and give your opinion using examples.  이렇게 문제가 길어주시면 정말~ 생각할 필요없어서 편하니.. 꼭 꼼꼼히 읽어서 이해하고 글을 쓰던 베껴쓰던 하길 바란다. 교육과 건강보험이 무료이거나 정부의 의해서 비용이 지급되어저야하만 하는가 아니면 이런 서비스를 이용하는 그 사람들에게만 책임이 있어야만 하는가 ~ 교육 에대해 무료화와 개인의 선택을 본론1에  건강보험에대해 무료화와 개인의 선택을 본론2에 글구성은 이런식이었다. 물론  밴드9 글은 서론부터 다르다 길고 임팩트있으며 구체적으로 멀 언급할지 암시도 준다. A healthy and educated society is the backbone of any successful society, however, deciding who is to provide this is a sensitive topic. I strongly be...

In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution? Traffic congestion in many cities around the world is severe. One possible solution to this problem is to impose heavy taxes on car drivers and use this money to make public transport better. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of such a measure. One of the first benefits of such a measure is that the heavy taxes would discourage car owners from using their cars because it would become very expensive to drive. This would mean that they would begin to make use of public transport instead, thus reducing traffic problems and pollution as well. Another benefit would be that much more use would be made of public transport if it was improved. It is often the case that public transport in cities is very poor. For example, we often see old buses and trains that people w...

The most significant advance ment in civilization is the invention of the Internet in order to share every piece of information ( with the very purpose of actually disseminating information for people to know about things ) . Some people maintain that the i I nternet will eventually replace the role of newspaper s in the future. There are several reasons for believing that the Internet is likely to grow in popularity . To begin with, The the first reason is the increase in the use of smart device s rather than t h e newspaper, in order to have access to news through the Internet. When we use this these smart devices, this such way means of reading news is utterly pertinent to citizens who are unlikely to carry many stuffs things during commute ( while taking public transportation ) . Many citizens in Korea have been surveyed and most of them answered that they are often to read and get news through from the Internet by using smart devices for while waiting for the b...

Most of the schools are planning to replace sports and exercise classes with more academic sessions. What is your opinion on this change? How does this change will affect children’s life in your view?   The debate between where to allocate valuable teaching resources probably started with the first educational institutions. In present day society the conflict continues and rightly so. In my opinion converting sports classes to more traditional subjects has two significant advantages. Firstly it is a more effective use of a students time, secondly in the future, academic skills are more useful. Switching time spent on sport in a school to time spent on more academic activities is a wise and cost effective solution. Firstly, academic studies are inherently less expensive to perform when compared to physical education. For example, to play almost any sport one has to invest in the appropriate equipment, ranging from shorts, t-shirts to rackets and balls. Furthermore...

Some people believe advertising causes more harm than good to society. Others refute this. Discuss both views and share your opinion. One of the main stimulatants of consumerism within a country is advertising. As such, advertising can be seen as  a necessary practice withing any healthy economy. But often people counter this by saying that too much exposure to commercial promotions can cause societal problems. On the one hand, advertising stimulates healthy spending, which can grow economies and create jobs. Take Coca-cola, for example. Coca-cola is a company that spends massive amounts on marketing every year. Because of this, it has become a brand that is recognized in the most remote cornor of the earth. This level of recognition allows even the smallest vendors anywhere in the world to create wealth through providing an attractice product with a powerful brand to potential customers. Thus, it is understandable why many people believe the benefits of advertising outweigh th...

소설을 잘 쓰고 싶으면 닮고싶은 작가의 글을 필사 하라 했다... 영어글을 잘 쓰고싶다??? 필사다.. 손가락이 뭉개질것처럼 아픔이 3일만에 찾아오고 네이버에검색에다간 자꾸만 편한 샤프 나 찾는 인간성이 나오지만.. 음.. 확실히 필사가.. 제일인듯하다... 물론 아무생각없이 필사할거면 집어치우고.. 나가서 손가락 하나로 풋샵이나 해라 배껴쓰기가 정령 답이길.. 바라는 일인.. 다음은 없다 이제.. 정말 해볼꺼 다 해봣다 나의 아이엘츠 롸이팅 삽질 시작한지 1년 9개월 점수는 다시 5점... 망할 5를 벗어나기만 하면 뭐든 하리요

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes(for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to the young ) To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Cam 9) 학생들에게 무보수 지역봉사를 강제로 고등학교에서 하나의 정규 프로그램으로 하는것에 동의 하냐 안하냐 ㅋㅋㅋ 이지.. 가로안에 친절히 예도 써주신 문제님.. 이렇게 긴 문제가 생각할 필요가 없어서 편하고 좋다고 했던 어느분 목소리가.. 기억난다. Some educators suggest that high school students should be involved in unpaid community services as part of the school curriculm. Although some studnets are against this school policy because it can infringe on their freedom, from my perspective, encouraging students to work in the community as part of the school curricula would be desirable as it can provide them with many invaluable skills for their lives. 각자의 토픽에 대한 상반된 입장을 나열한뒤 그리도 내 입장에선 이 지역사회를 위한 무보수노동이 가치가 있는데 그들삶을 위한 많은 어마어마한 가치있는 기술들을 제공하기때문이에요~ 라면서 토픽에 task response 하고 뒤로 멀 쓸건지를 암시해준다. Some maintain that compulsory activities for their ...

Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditinal foods and traditional methods of food preparation. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 아 정말 이 Convenience foods 랑 canned foods 엄청 햇갈렷는데// 가공식품과 캔에 밀봉된 식품 엄현히 다르다고 누가 계속 애기 해줫었지... processed food 도 Convenience food 랑 같은 의미라네..   일단 문제 읽고 먼뜻인지도 모를때가 있엇다.. 지금은 좀 괜찮아 졌지만 일단 젤 중요한게 문제에대한 task response 니까.. 이해가 갈때까지 읽고 확실히 이해해야한다.. 어쨋든 가공식품이 더 인기가 있어질거고 언젠간 전통식품을 완전히 대체 할거란 거다.. 동의 또는 비동의 ... 과연 동의가 쓸게 많을까 비동의가 많을까??? One of the most significant advance in civilization is the development of modern methods of food production and preparation. Convenience foods have now become the norm in many societies. Although some people idealize traditional cooking practices and believe they will prevail indefinitely, demographic trends suggest that this is unlikely to be the case. In fact there are a number of reasons for believing that convenience foods are likely to grow in popularity. 첫문장은 거...

왜 맨날 5점일까 생각하다 결론은.. 내가 지들처럼 안써서 이다... 늬그들이 맨날 보던 글이 아니니까 5점주는거다 왜.. 난 영어가 모국어가 아니고 29년 세월동안 논설이라곤 고등학교때도 한글로도 안썻던 거니까.. 방법은 하나... 모방.. 내꺼가 될때까지 모델 에세이를 마구마구 배껴 써보는거다. 모델 에세이 출처는 내가 엄청난 돈을 주고 다닌 학원서 받은것..이란걸 밝힌다. School should prepare pupils for their future lives and for the world of employment learning about history is not necessary and more emphasis should be placed on other school subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? - 솔직히 해석만 잘되면 문제가 긴게 쵝오다 ㅋㅋ 깊히 생각해서 쓸 필요가 없이 주어진거만 언급하면 되니까.. 근데 함정은 언급을 안해도 감점이 있다는 누군가의 목소리가 생각난다.. 사실.. 그런거 같기도 하다... 문제가 묻는걸 제대로 이해했는지 여부는 문제에대한걸 잘 언급하고 대답햇냐 아니냐니까..  근데 밑의 모델 에세이는 위에 주장을 따라가기보단 반대로 논지를 펴고 있다.. 내가 원하는 방향은 아니다.. 사실 동의해야 쓸게 더 많지 않을까? ㅋㅋ 근데 반대 하고 있는 모델에세이를 한번 보자... 어쨋든 난 passage 별로 3번씩 반복해서 써보고 마지막에 전체를 한번 배꼇다.. The role of school is to improve students ' ability to adapt to the field of work and the society after graduation. There are those who maintain that subjects such as history are of little v...

I have tired a lot of things to improve my band score in IELTS test, especially for writing. Actually, I have not put much time to practice in speaking, reading and listeing recently and I have taken this redicculous test 11 times in both British council and IDP in Korea, Republic of. I have been in trouble whenever I get the result in that writing band score as 5.0 or 5.5. The rest of score has been in between 6.0 and 6.5. Sometimes, I got a 6.0 band in writing of IELTS, that time, listening band was 5.5. This utterly frastrate me. My hope in 2014 has gone that aiming to attend to University of Newcast in AUS. Because of my each band score was L-6.5, R- 5.5, W-5.5, S-6.0. I knew the problem what I have in Reading test in this time. However, I cannot understand why My writing band is stucked between 5 to 5.5.  I knew how to improve listening, reading band score in IELTS by exercising myself for approximatelly 2 years. Listening ...