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 "Ignore the chatter, keep your costs minimal, and invest in stocks as you would in a farm." This is exactly what I think about the stock since I've invested in stock for 4 years to Celltrion in Korea, Republic. 

We know the largest difference between mother language learning and foreign language learning is the environment. A child can soon learn his mother language well. He has heard a lot before he can say something and walk. Then after he is able to walk and say, he has a chance of listening to more. Before he goes to school, he has already been a good listener and speaker. But for a foreign language, you can meet it only in formal places, classes, for example, otherwise, you can hardly have a chance to meet it. So I think you should try to let the students be in a language environment. Let the students grasp the phonetic symbol. I think the phonetic symbol is the base. A good intonation and phonetic depends on the base. Oral reading after a radio or a teacher is a good way at the beginning, Students should do much about it. Pay attention to the oral reading skill, It includes stress, strong form, weak form, intonation incomplete plosive consonant, affricate consonant, syllable and so o...

Korea has a lot of places that are fantastic to see or you could enjoy the city of Seoul, which is the capital of the country including Kangnam town inside of this city. Perhaps, some of you guys wants to tour this country with small account, but you might don't have any connection with people who live in Korea, therefore I am here for ya. Red circles are the places that you guys are going to tour in the city of Seoul, which city is a really big, do not forget that you cannot tour without tubes that are utterly complex, easy to lose your way I merely want to improve my Enlgish and get some small money and you guys will hire me with small account! [ USD $ 100 per one day ], any question or interesting about this deal. Send me an email - rpm103 @gmail.com   Regards Derrick Kim

세상참 좋아져서 인터넷만 되면 어디서든 영국방송을 볼수 있다. BBC 뉴스는 영국에서만 가능하니.. 포기하고 스카이뉴스를 즐겨보자! 밑에 주소를 클릭하면 원없이 즐길 수 있다.  인터넷 실시간 영어뉴스방송보기로 우리의 막힌 영어귀를 뚫어라!!!!!!!!!!!!! http://go.sky.com/vod/content/Home/content/videoId/eefdd9d2c3e5f110VgnVCM1000001f5012ac________/content/detachedLiveTv.do#url=http://go.sky.com/vod/content/Home/content/changeDetachedChannel.do?videoId=eefdd9d2c3e5f110VgnVCM1000001f5012ac ____

Firstly, Two nations's people cannot make exact pronounsiations of words or sentences in English that native speakers did. Therefore, we Korean and Japaness cannot distinguish meaning of some of sentences, but listen sound. This is because they cannot comprehend the Enlgish sound or dialogue whenever they listen. Secondly, Some maintain that Korean and Japaness use different part of mouth in a speech, compared to western people. They then generate different frequencies of sound in speaking: Korean and Japaness are 1200 to 1500, Western speakers are 1500 to 20000. To sum up, what should Korean and Japaness do for improvement in comprehension of English speech? This is only way that listen a lot of their sound such as BBC radio or T.V series, and mimic sound of them from what you guys heard from it. This is going to make their brain can accept the meaning of English sound seperately.

The brain has two big tasks related to speech: making it and understanding it. Psychologists and others who study the brain have debated whether these are really two separate tasks or whether they both use the same regions of the brain. Now, a new study finds that speaking and understanding speech share the same parts of the brain, with one difference: we don't need the brain regions that control the movements of lips, teeth, and so on to understand speech. 굉장히.. 이해가 되는 리서치 결과이다.  말하는 능력만큼 들린다. 반대로 들리는 만큼 말할 수 있다. 우리는 얼마만큼 들리는 소리를 흉내낼수 있을까? 소리도 흉내 못내는데 빠르게 이해하는게 가능하다는걸까? 소리는 냄새 다음으로 가장빠른 속도로 우리뇌에 자극을 준다. 소리를 흉내내야된다. 정확한 의미와함께 / 그게 정말 우리가 바라는 영어 학습 방법이다. The source came from below web site - http://www.sciencedaily.com/releases/2011/08/110816162313.htm

How do I can cope with this writing issue of what I have struggled in IELTS Academic writing? The sequence of thought is opposite to its way of my mother tongue; Korean. The important things must be located in front of the sentence then its supporting idea should be next. Mostly my consideration is that how to improve my writing and speaking skills in English as well as listening comprehension.

After burying the American east coast in snow all the way from Georgia up to Maine, the stome has moved to north to Canada, it has left icy trail of destuction in its wake, hundreds of thousands homes are still without power; mostly southen states like Carolinas, which are used to milder winter weather. The extream conditions are being blamed at least 25 deaths, mostly in traffic accidents on the road that are slick with ice, Thirty people were injured in muliti-car pileup in Pennsylvania and more than 14,000 flights have been cancelled this week so far. President Obama has left ice in Washinton for West coast, where he has been talking about very different type of extream weather, California is in the midst of its worst drought in a hundred years. H e promised fedral money to help deal with what he called "very challenging situation". 이중에 어떤 단어소리가 들려도 바로 이해되는 정도가 되야된다. Source came from below - http://www.bbc.co.uk/worldservice/learningenglish/language/wo...

Yesterday, I read a book, which is about the stroke to a neurologist who was the expert in the field. Fortunately,  she has been recovered totatlly except of some strugglings of reading, for example, too slow to comprehend the sign or character on the traffic plate when she is driving. One thing she and her mother do in this tragedy in order to recover all function that she had is utterly simple.  Monkey see, monkey do !!! How simple is that?  Why not I could not adapt this way of learning to studying English ???!   Mimic is the best way of learning. Beacuse every baby do, who is even about to born, someday they will be a fluent speaker in their mother tongue.  Therefore, from now on, I only focus on doing mimic of reports's saying on skynews or BBC on the Internet. I am sure, this way will turn me to a being of fluent English speaker, especially British accent.

Some said that input is more essential rather than output in acquisition. However, others do not agree with this opinion. How does our brain learn something? By doing of reading or writing? As a second language learner in English, this is the imperative argument to be efficient in the way of learning, to shorten the length of being perfect in fluent speaking and writing logically. please give your opinion, input or output, which is more important to you in this case?

아카데믹한 문장을 각인될때까지 입의 모든 근육을 사용해서 소리와함께 외우기 부모와 사회 모두 10대 범죄에 책임을 져야 한다. Both parents and the society should be responsible for the juvenile delinquency. 10대들은 그들의 비행에 대한 대가를 치러서는 안된다. 그들은 범죄자가 아니고 희생자이기 때문이다. No teenagers should pay the price for the juvenile delinquncy as they are not crimininals, but victioms. 아이들의 잘못된 판단단은 잘못된 행동으로 이어진다. Children's misjudgement leads to the misconduct. 잘못된 행동은 미숙한 판단에 근거 한다. Misconduct is based on the poor judgement. 기업의 잘못된 행동은 단순한 범죄가 아니다. Corporate misconduct is not a simple crime. 한 젊은 노동자의 죽음이 '독재' 에 대한 국가적 차원의 저항을 촉발했다 Death of a young worker triggered the protest against the dictatorship throughout the country. 그의 업무수행능력은 그 평판에 걸맞다. His performance matches his reputation. 그 자리를 지원한 사람의 세부사항이 요구조건과 맞아 떨어집니다. The details of the candidate for the position matches the requirement. 부모와 사회 모두 10대 범죄에 책임을 져야 한다. 10대들은 그들의 비행에 대한 대가를 치러서는 안된다. 그들은 범죄자가 아니고 희생자이기 때문이다. 아이들의 잘못된 판단단은 잘못된 행동으로...

아카데믹한 문장을 각인될때까지 입의 모든 근육을 사용해서 소리내서 외우기 T.V에 나오는 선정적인 장면들은 아이들을 겁먹게 할지도 모른다. Sensual scence on TV may make children scared. 선정적인것은 이성의 대한 환상을 갖게 한다. Something sensual fantasizes the other gender. 대중매체는 사람들이 생각하는 방식에 영향을 미친다. Mass media has an effect on the way people think. 모범을 보이는 부모님들은 아이들의 감정발달에 긍정적인 영향을 미친다. The parents who set the standard have a positive effect on cildren's emotional development. 일관성이 없는 부모들은 아이들 정신발달에 부정적인 영향을 미친다. The parent who show inconsistency  have a negative effect on chidren's mental development. 아이들은 저속한 행동조차 모방할 것이다. Children would copy obscene behaviours. 저속한 언어는 여기서 불법화 되어야 한다. 아이들은 들은 것을 모방하기 때문이다. The obscene language should be illegalized to use here as children would copy what they listen to. 저속한 언어의 사용은 아이들 언어 습관에 부정적인 영향을 준다. Use of obscene language would have a negative effect on children's linguistic habit. Recite in English !!! Yes ! you can do it T.V에 나오는 선정적인 장면들은 아이들을 겁먹게 할지도 모른다. 선정...

Advertisings flood in capitalist state, because they are essential to let consumers know the existence of a particular product on the market. Thus, success of a business depends on the quality of advertising. However, some advertising are claimed to affect children in the negative way. In this essay, its pros and con will be addressed as follows. To begin with, some advertising are so violent and more sensual than necessary that they would have the negative effect on the children's emotional development. Because once they are familiar with those contents, they would take violence and obscene materials for granted, leading to the tendency to put them into practice, the juvenile misconduct. A good example is the nudity in an well-known ice cream advertising in Australia seems to trigger sexual desire rather than focus on the product. On the other hand, the information such as features and the expected benefits in advertising would help children to judge the advertised product in...

IELTS 라이팅 7.0 도전기 모델 에세이 부분부분 나눠서 익숙해질까지 읽고 또 읽고 읽고 쓰고 다시 읽고 익숙해질때까지 외우고 베껴쓰기 Another reason is that the advertising is similar to a wake up call to consumers, which means it informs them of the product in their need being on the market. If availability of the product to the market is unkwon, it is disadvantageous to both vendors who struggle to supply the product to the market and consumers seeking the product. Given that no method is more effective than advertising so as to let consumers know the existence of a particular product, the value of advertising cannot be overemphasized. 다른 이유는 광고는 소비자들에게는 일어나라는  한 통의 전화와 유사하다. 그건 광고가 그들이 필요한 제품이 시장에 있다고 알려준다는 뜻이다. 만약 제품을 살 수 있다는 사실이 알려지지 않으면, 시장에 제품을 공급하려는 애쓰는 상인과 그 제품을 찾는 소비자 모두에게 불이익이 된다. 소비자들에게 특정제품의 존재를 알리는데 광고보다 효과적인 방법이 없다는 사실을 고려하면, 광고의 가치는 가소평가 될 수 없다.

7.0 아이엘츠 라이팅 도전기 읽고 또 읽고 또 읽고 쓰고 외우고 읽고 무한 반복 익숙하게 외울때까지 To begin with, even if the product information on T.V advertising highlights only its bright side, it helps consumers to identify their need firmly, make the best choice by comparison of its features with other similar products. what it means is that the more information is given, the better choice can be made. Furthermore, consumers' credibility with the commercial message from the mass media would contribute to increasing the sale. 우선, T.V 속 제품광고가 밝은 면만 강조할지라도 소비자들이 자신들의 '니드'를 확고하게 확인하고 다른 유사제품과 그 특징을 비교함으로써 최고의 선택을 할 수 있도록 도와준다. 그것이 의미하는 것은 더 많은 정보가 주어질 수록 더 나은 선택이 가능하다는 것이다. 더구나, 대중매체의 상업적 메시지에 대한 소비자들의 신뢰는 매출 증가에 기여할 것이다.

아이엘츠 라이팅 서론 -  라이팅7.0 이상 쓰기..도전.... 익숙해질때까지 읽고 또 읽고 또 읽고 다시 쓰고 외우고 읽고 무한반복 Introduction Once a product meets consumers' need, consumers may be aware of the product. Thus, spending on advertising can be a waste of budget to some extent. However, a role of advertising consists in the product information provided, which is connected to growth in sales. In this essay, pros for the latter will be expressed. There are two reasons for that. 일단 어느 제품이 소비자의 니드를 충족시킨다면, 소비자들은 그 제품을 인식할지도 모른다.따라서, 광고에 지출하는 것은 예산 낭비가 될 수 있다. 하지만, 광고의 역할은 제공되는 제품정보에 있으며, 그것이 매출 성장과 관계가 있다. 이 에세이에서는 후자에 대한 찬성이 표현될 것이다. 두가지 이유가 있다.

1. 문법적으로 완벽한 문장을 단어의 강세[intonation]를 고려해서 음독한다. - 리듬을 타며 읽는다. 2. 그리고 외운다. 입의 모든 근육을 사용해서 3. 암송한뒤, 시간이 지나고 암기한것을 글로 옮겨본다. 4. 다시 음독을 한다.

서론 - 3문장 본론1- 4문장 본론2- 4문장 결론- 3문장 총 14 ~ 15문장정도로 만 써도 250자 충분히 넘긴다. 간단하면서도 명사를 잘 활용한 글쓰기가 영어에세이 높은 BAND의 관건이 아닐까? 그래야 250자에 맞게 쓸수있고 시간안배도 잘되면서 헛소리를 안할 확율이 높아진다. 14문장이 많은가?   생각보다 많지 않다. 사실 막상 쓰다보면 대체로 300자 넘어간다 엄청난 에러들이 50자나 추가되는것이다...... 감점확일이 15%이상 늘어난다... 간단하게 명확하게 잘 쓰기위한 요령이 뭐가 있을까? 현대사회에 이 문제가 오랫동안 이슈가 되 왔다(1). 몇몇들은 이게 이렇다고 한다(2). 하지만 난 이렇게 생각한다(3). 이거와 함께 난 이 두 생각에 대한 각 의견과 내 의견을 논의할것이다(4). 현대사회에서는 이것이 그 시민들을 위해 꼭 장려되야하는데 여기에는 여러가지 장점들이 있기 때문이다(1). 첫째, ~~~~~ (2) 둘째, ~~~~~(3) 그러므로, 이것은 그 현대사회 시민들을 위해 꼭 필요하다 (4) 하지만, 몇몇들은 이것이 현대사회에서 쓸모없다고 한다(1). This is because 이러고 저러코 해서다(2), In addition, 이건 또 여기에 이렇게 필요가 없더라 for example, 이런 경우에 이건 쓸모가 없었다(3). 이러한 경우처럼  현대사회가 꼭 필요한것만 정책으로 활용해야할 것이다(4). On balance, 현대문명에서 이것이 널리 활용되온건 사실이다(1). 이것이 이러저러해서 중요하다지만, 난 쓸모없다고 생각하는걸 강력히 믿는다(2) 그러므로 사람사는 사회에서 이것을 추구해야된다(3).

서론조차 제대로 시작을 못하니.. 시간이 오래걸리고 생각정리도 안되는것 같다. 첫 단추를 잘 껴야 나머지 단추들도 잘 껴지듯이 첫 문장부터 무엇에 대한 애기인지 운을 띄우고(put general statement regards with topic ) + 여기에 논쟁에을 추가 한다. (Put arguable statement of the topic) + 내가 지향하는 의견을 쓰고 (Put my opinion about this argument) + 이 에세이가 무엇을 다룰지 쓴다 (Put explaination of what things will be discussed below. ) 이게 제대로 안되면... 시작부터 글은 산으로 산으로 ... 간다.. 저 멀리

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.   Should criminals be punished with lengthy jail terms or be re-educated and rehabilitated using, for instance, community service programmes, before being reintroduced to society. Present a written case or argument to an educated non-specialist audience on the above topic.   Write at least 250 words. Although (Despite the fact that) rehabilitation program works in some case, a long sentence in prison is utterly needed at least until the alternative system s is completely proved. The proponents of the former thought maintain that the rehabilitation of criminals should be referred again to our society. However, I do not agree with this opinion because most prisoners are likely to do offence again , and they need to be imprisoned in order to protect our citizens from those criminals . In line with this, this essay will present points to justify my opinion. [1]   Although many humanists...

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.   Should developing countries only concentrate on improving industrial skills and modern technology or should they promote education first? Present your opinion.   Write at least 250 words. Many developing countries are faced with the difficulty of choosing between investing on practical skills for industry (industrialization) or increasing the level of average (quality) education to fast forward their development. Between the two options, I believe that the development of the quality education is more potent in addressing the needs of the nations and its citizens and I will discuss the reasons behind it in the following paragraphs. [1] On the one hand, modern technology is an essential part in developing countries.   Since practical skills contribute in many fields like the export and import industry from which the nation gains much profit it is highly recommended that this field should ...

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.   Some people think that developed countries should fund international aid to poor countries to help developing countries improve domestic health, education and trade. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?   Write at least 250 words. Some maintain that affluent nations should fund international aid to help developing countries in education, domestic health and even trade. I believe that this activities should be encouraged and reintroduced to many developed countries. This essay will present why international aid are necessary to poorer nations. Firstly, affluent nations should fund international aid to help developing nations, especially domestic health and education. Because the poorer nations cause constant epidemic disease to spread across the globe. With this, developed nations should donate to the nations in order to decrease the rate of ...

- 각 문단에 concluding sentense 가 없단다 - 교육분야의 한국의 교육에 관련된건 off topic 이란다. - trade 에서도 예로 든것이 off topic .. - 일부로 3문단으로 나눈것이 실수인듯하다. 2문단으로 구성해서 T + S + E + C 를 지켜서 쓰는게 낳을듯 싶다. - 적어도 3문장 이상식을 간단하게나마 넣도록 해야것다. - 첨삭 내용 Irrelevant supporting details. It is not enough that you provide supporting details to the topic sentence of a paragraph. You have to make sure that the supporting details you provide are appropriate to the topic being discussed. For instance, in paragraph 2, the main topic is concerned with why foreign aid should be given to improve the education in developing countries. However, the supporting details about Korean parents focusing on their children’s education do not adequately explain the topic sentence. Hence, such arguments should be revised.   Missing Concluding Sentence. It is good that you were able to group your ideas properly in each paragraph. However, your paragraphs are not developed as they lack concluding sente...

- 서론과 결론에도 적어도 3문장 이상을 쓰라고 되있다.. 그럼.. 250자가 너무 넘어가던데.. - 1시간정도 공을 들여 쓴건데도 7이 되지 않는다.. 불안함.. - 고쳐진것을 10번 베껴쓰기 시도해서 틀린것을 알아야한다. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.   Although education in many developing countries is not compulsory, an effort should be made to ensure that all children between the ages of 5 and 15 years attend some form of schooling. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?   Write at least 250 words. Many (A number of) advanced societies have a law in terms of compulsory education to for children for the sake of their future and their country as well. I strongly believe that children who are under the age of 15 should be educated for their future jobs and for them to have a more plentiful lifestyle. In line with this, the following paragraphs will elaborate on why children need to be educated. [1]   Although there are a lot of ways to become (turn out to be) successful citizens, without ed...