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Question 

Most countries spend much money on education, as they start to realize the importance of education. In your opinion which two subjects are the most important for young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 

In a highly competitive society, many people focus on education for their brilliant future. However, in my opinion, young people should be aware of which is the most, second, and least important subject among them. I think that history is most important one which has recorded many mistakes by human, this may teach youths to be better in advanced society, while sport and music as investigative subject is not worthy to study in depth by students.   

When it comes to history as the most important subject, to students, because this subject has taught them a lot of past mistakes will not be repeated and avoided, which has made by human such as the World War 1 and 2, Great Depression or slavery, these mistakes can be informed to many young people. Therefore, the majority youngsters can learn a lot of problems and solutions from history subject.

Secondly, the next imperative subject is mathematics, which helps a wide range of areas in science and technology. For instance, we human could not have reached the moon by spaceship, without mathematic abstract fundamental studies and humans would not even think space travel to the Mars. As a result, mathematics gives vast possibilities to the field in science and technology, which makes more convenient modern lifestyles.

However, there is also the least imperative subject- sports and music – which are close to a kind of hobby, not investigative subject. In addition, sports have been used to attract citizen’s interest from the current affairs such as famine, war, and corruption. In South Korea case, the government has used the power of sports and music to entertain their citizens instead of making severe issue about economic crisis, unemployment rate and default of mortgage loan. However, these subjects have not been seen other benefits without aforementioned truths. In short, music and sports has been useful to be enjoyed or hobby, not research and basic knowledge in university.

In conclusion, young people need to be aware of a variety of among many basic studies and to consider which one is the priority subjects. However, I believe that history and mathematics cannot be replaced first rank with sports and music in any case.